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Makin' my way downtown by SkittyStrawberries Makin' my way downtown by SkittyStrawberries
Part of a picture I'm working on. This damn picture is taking forever aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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Liv make this my new ID pls

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Hello, Tadase here! Just wanted to give you a bit of a critique here on this lovely piece.
First off, It's simply wonderful in most aspects. The anatomy is very good.. especially on the arms, and the Vulpix. I also like how you shaded, particularly on the clothing and tail. It gives them both a very fluffy look! You did a very good job not making patterns look stiff. A lot of artists,myself included have a tendancy to not show the way that folds affect the patterns like the ones on the socks and shirt. However, you did, especially on the socks... and it really shows! I also really like how you used a cool color for the shorts, despite the piece being entirely warm colors otherwise. The way you shaded them with a dark red made it seem very tied together.
However, I would have perhaps used a more purplish red; as is, it looks a little strange. Like the two colors don't belong next to eachother. Speaking of not belonging next to eachother... I do think that the vulpix looks a little strange next to her. Since her tail is fluffy, the fact that vulpix's tails don't show any fur whatsoever, giving a more plastic-like look, seems a little off.
Lastly, is just one tiny detail i noticed... It's usually best to put lines next to very light colored parts, like the top of the nose... but that ones really up to you!

Keep up the great work~
-Tadase
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Clarabee Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
I LOVE this thats one of my favs and you being a gingr just makes it work i wish i was good as art....But still! LOVE IT!!!
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JazztheFoxeh Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist
haters gonna hate :icondealwithitplz: (first thought that came to my head owo) lol anyways, this ish awesome! i love it x3
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medikkuu Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gotta love dem big sweaters ~
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Azorium Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
So cute! >w<
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Feline-Kat Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:O
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FireStar810 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
awwww
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cutecat54546 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
awwwww cute!!!
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KatWolfKid Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Walkin' fast
Faces past and I'm home bound
DUNDUNDNANNANAA- //shot
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pinkpinga574 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student General Artist
lol when i saw this i thought of "Haters Gona Hate"
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pinkpinga574 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student General Artist
this is AWSOME
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