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Makin' my way downtown by SkittyStrawberries Makin' my way downtown by SkittyStrawberries
Part of a picture I'm working on. This damn picture is taking forever aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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Hello, Tadase here! Just wanted to give you a bit of a critique here on this lovely piece.
First off, It's simply wonderful in most aspects. The anatomy is very good.. especially on the arms, and the Vulpix. I also like how you shaded, particularly on the clothing and tail. It gives them both a very fluffy look! You did a very good job not making patterns look stiff. A lot of artists,myself included have a tendancy to not show the way that folds affect the patterns like the ones on the socks and shirt. However, you did, especially on the socks... and it really shows! I also really like how you used a cool color for the shorts, despite the piece being entirely warm colors otherwise. The way you shaded them with a dark red made it seem very tied together.
However, I would have perhaps used a more purplish red; as is, it looks a little strange. Like the two colors don't belong next to eachother. Speaking of not belonging next to eachother... I do think that the vulpix looks a little strange next to her. Since her tail is fluffy, the fact that vulpix's tails don't show any fur whatsoever, giving a more plastic-like look, seems a little off.
Lastly, is just one tiny detail i noticed... It's usually best to put lines next to very light colored parts, like the top of the nose... but that ones really up to you!

Keep up the great work~
-Tadase
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Clarabee Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
I LOVE this thats one of my favs and you being a gingr just makes it work i wish i was good as art....But still! LOVE IT!!!
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JazztheFoxeh Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist
haters gonna hate :icondealwithitplz: (first thought that came to my head owo) lol anyways, this ish awesome! i love it x3
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medikkuu Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gotta love dem big sweaters ~
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Azorium Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013
So cute! >w<
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Feline-Kat Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:O
teachmehowtodrawliekdat
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FireStar810 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013
awwww
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cutecat54546 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
awwwww cute!!!
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KatWolfKid Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Walkin' fast
Faces past and I'm home bound
DUNDUNDNANNANAA- //shot
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pinkpinga574 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student General Artist
lol when i saw this i thought of "Haters Gona Hate"
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pinkpinga574 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Student General Artist
this is AWSOME
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foxrazpberry Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
cool work keep it up!
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Hi-TuVy Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh man, that is awesome!
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Byakurin Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WALKING FAST

FACES PASSED AND I'M HOMEBOUNDDD
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SkittyStrawberries Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Filmographer
STARNG BLANKLY AHEAD MAKIN MY WAY MAKIN MY WAY THROUGH THE CROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW

HelpImcryingoverpokemonhelppls
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AnUnfoldedPaperTiger Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Writer
And I need you...
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Byakurin Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
WHATDOYOUNEEDHELPYWITH
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:iconskittystrawberries:
SkittyStrawberries Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Filmographer
MAKE POKEMON NOT SAD
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:iconbyakurin:
Byakurin Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AS IN
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:iconskittystrawberries:
SkittyStrawberries Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Filmographer
MAKE JIRACHI STAY WITH MAX
DONT LET LATIOS DIE
JUST
JUST
AAAAAAAAAAAAA
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:iconbyakurin:
Byakurin Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMGEEE IKRRRR
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hot-bunns Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Dat almost lineless...

DAT GREAT ANATOMY!

DAT EVERYTHING!

Damn I envy you...
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AlphaStars Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Very kawaii like your face kdsgfsjg <33
really loving the shading!
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SkittyStrawberries Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Filmographer
asdfghjk
Thank you so much ;v;
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Swifttail28 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So awesome! It looks like she should be walking down the street with her dog. Except her dog is an awesome, 6 tailed fire-breathing fox. I wish I could attain even a fraction of this girls awesomeness. (Is she you? Beclaws that would be cool)
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SkittyStrawberries Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Filmographer
Ye that's me ;v;
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Outer--Science Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
>sub>Congrats on getting on the front page! <3
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CreamyShota Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
walking fast and i'm home-bound...
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CountryPup13 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
That's so amazing!!!
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BlitzEngles Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
dammit Rea. Dammit.

das so perf.

you so perf.

ufecjbdsiwffwe <3 <3 amazing job, palebroo
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Chocukat Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
SO JELLY RIGHT NOW AHHGDGJS:heart:
srsly so amazing<33
Oh~! mmkkk I'll code that now C:
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SkittyStrawberries Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Filmographer
Yayyyyyyyyyyyy! 8D <3
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Chocukat Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
DONE <3
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shibe-intensifies Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
WALKING FAST
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brokenthroat Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
swag
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VannilaCoco Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
The shading is absolutely gorgeous!
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GardevoirLoverHope Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good song :iconilikeitplz:

Even better art :heart:
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Rosepetal866 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
This is the best thing since ever. ^_^
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SkittyStrawberries Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Filmographer
Gladyoulikeitcauseyournthefinalproduct
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Rosepetal866 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
NowayohmygoshI'msoexcitednowImightpee....sorrytmi ;P
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SkittyStrawberries Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Filmographer
heeheehee
Also,didWyethtellyousheconvertedtoMormanism?
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Rosepetal866 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
Nuhuhnoshedidn'tbutdidshereallythatwouldbeweirdbutwat
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SkittyStrawberries Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Filmographer
Shedidgoaskher
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Rosepetal866 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
nowayIdon'tbelieveyou.
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SkittyStrawberries Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Filmographer
Askheryoself
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Waterbender-Jay Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I absolutely love it! Fantastic job :3 so cute :D
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merela88 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013   General Artist
Awesome! its so cute! :heart:
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CatamariDamacy Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
Aaaaah it's so beautiful ;;
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Radioactive-Flash Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
very nice!
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Katydidnothing Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it's gonna take FOREEEEVAAAAAAH
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