Hello, Tadase here! Just wanted to give you a bit of a critique here on this lovely piece. First off, It's simply wonderful in most aspects. The anatomy is very good.. especially on the arms, and the Vulpix. I also like how you shaded, particularly on the clothing and tail. It gives them both a very fluffy look! You did a very good job not making patterns look stiff. A lot of artists,myself included have a tendancy to not show the way that folds affect the patterns like the ones on the socks and shirt. However, you did, especially on the socks... and it really shows! I also really like how you used a cool color for the shorts, despite the piece being entirely warm colors otherwise. The way you shaded them with a dark red made it seem very tied together. However, I would have perhaps used a more purplish red; as is, it looks a little strange. Like the two colors don't belong next to eachother. Speaking of not belonging next to eachother... I do think that the vulpix looks a little strange next to her. Since her tail is fluffy, the fact that vulpix's tails don't show any fur whatsoever, giving a more plastic-like look, seems a little off. Lastly, is just one tiny detail i noticed... It's usually best to put lines next to very light colored parts, like the top of the nose... but that ones really up to you!
First off, It's simply wonderful in most aspects. The anatomy is very good.. especially on the arms, and the Vulpix. I also like how you shaded, particularly on the clothing and tail. It gives them both a very fluffy look! You did a very good job not making patterns look stiff. A lot of artists,myself included have a tendancy to not show the way that folds affect the patterns like the ones on the socks and shirt. However, you did, especially on the socks... and it really shows! I also really like how you used a cool color for the shorts, despite the piece being entirely warm colors otherwise. The way you shaded them with a dark red made it seem very tied together.
However, I would have perhaps used a more purplish red; as is, it looks a little strange. Like the two colors don't belong next to eachother. Speaking of not belonging next to eachother... I do think that the vulpix looks a little strange next to her. Since her tail is fluffy, the fact that vulpix's tails don't show any fur whatsoever, giving a more plastic-like look, seems a little off.
Lastly, is just one tiny detail i noticed... It's usually best to put lines next to very light colored parts, like the top of the nose... but that ones really up to you!
Keep up the great work~
-Tadase
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