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Omen of the Stars VENT

Journal Entry: Thu Nov 15, 2012, 5:36 PM

Animation is really getting to me, and im getting upset, so I'm going to vent a bit about the Omen of the Stars Warriors arc, and these will be some things I haven't really seen brought up much, here goes.

First, I haven't offocially read The Last Hope yet, but I know that *SPOILERS* Brambleclaw makes Squirrelflight deputy.Now, I have nothing against Squirrelflight, I think she is very loyal, but I havn't seen anything to make her an outstanding warrior or display exceptional leadership skills. To my understanding, Brambleclaw's choice in making her deputy was puerly to show that he trusted her again and that they were going to be mates again.
He could have simply said that to her instead of making his first bad choice as a leader. Dustpelt would have made an outstanding deputy. Or hey, maybe Thornclaw? OR maybe he could have given the deputy position back to the cat he stole it from, Graystripe. OR! IDEA! MAYBE LIONBLAZE!!! Lionblaze would have made a kick ass leader, don't you even try to deny it. And it wouldn't be unfair either.
So yeah, nice going Bramble/star/

Second, the whole concept of cats fading away is bullshit.
A) Because the cats who first founded the clans were still around, yet never mentioned by any cat except for a prolog when they spoke. Hmmmmm. *accusing glare*
B) Mapleshade wasn't THAT old! She was still alive when Crookedstars father was born, and she was fading really fucking quickly. If the excuse is that she was being forgotten, then this is utter bs, because at the very least, Ivypool and Tigerheart damn sure remembered her in the libing world. AND! Not to mention, that she was fading so fast, while Halfmoon was still around hundreds of maybe thousads of moons later.
Utter bull shit.

Another thing that bugged me, was that Yellowfangs character was completly forgotten. When she went off on Jayfeather how Leafpool wasn't a medecine cat anymore and how she wasn't even allowed to pretend she ever had been mentored in the medicine stuffs, thats was such UTTER hipocracy thats its ridicuilous! And then she wanted to Ruin Cinderhearts life? Really??? The one other cat who wasn't Firestar that she truely cared for? When Yellowfang was PROBABLY the one who convinced Starclan to give her another life?

Just a side note, what the fuck is Birchfall doing in the Dark Forest?
Why is he there?
He needs to leave.


  • Mood: Thrilled
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Makaruu Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student Filmographer
there are things that are wrong but come on you try to write 40 something books about wild cats with a belief, i mean people are judging it a little too much! (ithinkbramblestarshouldnthavemadescquirrelflightdepcauselionblazewouldbelikealotbetter)
ImFrigginFLUFFY Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Some of this can be explained... but I must admit, I have to agree with you on some of it =3=
BloodVendor Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I never read past the 2nd series it just got so dang boring because it was the same story over and over again. Plus, the writers were getting lazy.
aliscats Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student General Artist
XFlight Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Filmographer
Agreed ._.
That's just bullshit right there haha
RosyKat Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
I really only wanted to read the fist one and some other aditions that have things to do with it, i relized all of this from watching too many animations. :T
I thought i was the only one who hated them! i'm not alone. ;u; Haha, Ravenpaw is still my fav. cat. For some reason...
Aero-Synn Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
the only good thing that came out of The Last Hope was Firestar's death.

Squirrelflight better step down RIGHT THE FUCK NOW and give it over to Graystripe, atleast before he retires /sawb/

Why the fuck was Mapleshade in the dark forest anyway? She got kicked out and took a mate from Riverclan. But both Mudclaw and Ashfur tried to kill their clanmates. whatthefuck. Okay, yes, she was bitter and angry, but did she do anything wrong? NO. I honestly doubt she would have made crookedstar go through all of those things (Crookedstars Promise 8D) if Starclan had accepted her.

Also, I think Lionblaze was destined to become leader. but then brambleclaw had to go and fuck it up. 8D

I also feel terrible for Ivypaw/pool. First, she's practically ignored by the clan and her sister, so she goes to the dark forest. Then her sister goes and screams at her that shes an idiot, then they USE her as a spy, and they PUT HER LIFE ON THE LINE. Seriously? What kind of sister does that. WHO would let anybody do that to their sister, even if it /was/ Lionblaze and Jayfeather. THAT SHOWS HOW MUCH SHE DOESNT CARE 8D the fourth cat should have been ivypool. and dovewing should have died. the end.

i hate a lot of the main characters now. except jayjay
catgore Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I don't even really read it anymore because the stupid plot and marysues irk me so much. v u v ughhhhh

i still buy the books and read them when i'm extremely bored but they are just getting worse and worse and the books don't grow with the audience [which i honestly think they should] so i thought they were amazing when i was younger but now i just think the books are full of marysue characters with shittily thought out plots.

honestly i enjoy roleplaying fan-made warriors [for instance, on] and watching fanmade animations/amvs from when the plots actually WERE decent, but i'm somewhat over it now.
BlUE-Cl0UD Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The last Hope sucked. It was rushed. I thought that Lionblaze was gonna be chosen. But no. Squirrelflight doesn't look like she's the type to be a Deputy. I still like Warriors and all. But the Last Hope was bullshit. ._.
eclipsesong Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
I think ur gonna be uber disapointed. when I finished it I cried for 10 minutes straight.
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